Published 22 days ago

Give Thanks

Give Thanks
One … two … three 
One … two … three. 
The corn is all crimson, all sticky and served 
Not in the kitchen, no. 
Mama and Papa don’t know. 
One - two - three - 
Our sins, our sins 
It’s what we deserved. 

Where did the grownups go? 

Our angel saw us 
And they looked so sick- 
So pale 
Their teeth are like fangs 
and arms like bat wings 
Their skin was light, translucent. 

It didn’t come down from any cloud 
It crawled from the well in the corner field 

We saw it. They saw it. 

It said they weren’t meant to see 
Except us - me and Evelyn. 

“Evelyn? “

“Yes?” 

“What did you pray? 
Why did you look down?”

“I wanted to know why the corn is decayed. 
I asked the angel to talk to me - 
We played a game.” 

That tight, fluttery feeling in my chest? 
The one Mama calls the Holy Spirit? 
I got that feeling, and a voice told me to welcome it.” 

I said, “Come in, come in - show me the truth.” 

Then it crawled out 

Said “no one provides” 

Evelyn went quiet. I remember
What we saw 
This heinous creature 
It killed our parents 
And took their blood. 
It dipped the corn - 
that dead, fly-infested corn 
And held it before our faces. 

Evelyn isn’t the same. I’m scared but I can’t leave her. 

She bows her head and prays 

“Thank you for this, our bread, for providing for us, your children -  
Amen” 

Oh Evelyn. 

Why did you say that? 



#LavishHalloween2025 #poetry #halloween #spookywriting #horror #halloween 

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an indigenous creator - writer - actress always with my cat & living deliciously 🖤🪶

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Jeff Richardson

22 days ago 2 replies
This is amazing. I've been reading about weird and eerie and this is both!! I could almost smell the rot in the corn!!! What a story.
Yessss, glad you enjoyed it.

Jolie Elizabeth Scalfano

22 days ago 2 replies
I LOVE this!!!!!! 🎃❤️
Thankyouuuuu 🖤

Chronically Indigigoth

22 days ago 3 replies
I’m from Canada, and there Thanksgiving & Halloween are in the same month. So I took my prompts outside and just started writing whatever I thought. Weird brain things.

GrizzlyPhantoms

11 days ago 2 replies
This is the result of Weird Brain Things™ and I... Give Thanks to you for it. Was that too corny? 🌽
😂🤣🤣🤣 oh lord, glad you liked it

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